Why
Why does she have the tendency
To let her heart linger on him
As if he were the sun
Which is orbited by planets
When he is obviously not, yet somehow
His charm is as great as the sun’s gravity
An equation, which is arguable
But might be undeniably valid, because
As sun’s gravity keeps everything in place
His charm is the only force in the universe
Which can hold such great energy inside her heart
His charm is the only force in the universe
Which can keep her heart gravitating to him
— DNP
Lovely energetic poem; one that revolves around the sun!
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Thank you, Sunith! π
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His charm is as great as the sun gravity.. Nice.. Nice poem
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Hello, thank you very much! π
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such a beautiful poem for someone who means so much to her
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Thank you, Gina π
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Robin π
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I love how you start with such a simple question and build to an answer big enough that feels like it could fill a heart. Nicely done!
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Thank you, Tanya π
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Your use of the word ‘Tendency…’and the whole verse tilts on that. An energy k cant quote name, but it’s there…. the algebra of romance,and some. Wow!
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Hey, thank you! π
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‘An energy I cant quite name….’ sorry, error.
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I missed this one last week… hard to imagine how given its pull (LOL)! So sorry, but happy to catch up on it now! Wonderful poem, thank you so much for sharing it with us at the Cafe!
Stephen
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Hey Stephen, no worries! Glad you like this π
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π€
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You write beaitifully!! π
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Heyy, thank you so much! β€
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My pleasure, nabila π
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